Talk:Dasmius Krystallo/@comment-5311048-20150420024851

reading this rp character, work is needed to teh background story a bit, over all it is a gret character. A few things i'd like to state that may help you.

1. Although statting he raced the guardian of guthix to kill Guthix, it should be changed that he raced against the Guthixian and Zarosian seeing the Adventurer going ahead of him, just to sound more of a less confusion to others.

2. Tuska arrival is still unknown to everyone but a few who are trying their hardest to study the space. You can state concern over Tuska and the airuts, BUT, details on him knowing of her arrival that still isn't around is needed.

3. he still needs description on how he managed to survive the gods-war in the early age, due to all the icyene died in hallowland, and in Fortinity. My character Commander Suriel is an example of how he survived, maybe you can think of a good one :)

Overall this page still needs appearance, details as well. Good luck on your characte btw.