Talk:Exanderaz Vanex Drayk/@comment-5691401-20121103182104/@comment-4536066-20121103185246

Your article could use an introduction paragraph. That basically means a short, uh-headed paragraph at the top of your page (that comes BEFORE the table of contents) giving a very basic overview of who this character is. Most people list things like name, age, race, and other profile basics, as well as any other really important, straight-forward details.

You can see what I'm talking about at the beginning of the Example Character page.