Talk:Jade Everric/@comment-5523905-20140423183939/@comment-4547854-20140423205646

Yeah, the red block with the quote is really random and doesn't feel like it should be on the page, and the quote template the wiki has would be much better. I agree with the header for the most part, but I think the pink could stay if it was less sudden.

What I mean, you have a sudden pink rectangle just BOOM, there. I feel like if you were to have a little bleeding-into-the-page effect, it would look a lot better than what it looks like now.

Overall, there's just way too much going on in the intro for it to be eye-pleasing. You have the sudden red and purple-pink blocks, the intro itself, and an infobox with some hentai. It needs to be cut down a lot.