Talk:Nexus/@comment-30710685-20161212225302

2 things, minor edit and story question

1. this sentence needs a little adjustment: it was a dangerous challenge, as they lost several guards and adventurer, 

It  was a dangerous challenge, as they lost several guards and an adventurer, 

or

It  was a dangerous challenge, as they lost several guards and adventurers, 

2. Aren't vampires strictly to the east of the river salve? I doubt even the few that might have managed to cross would get past Varrok.