User blog:CptHayleySpears/Sample of a little something I'm brewing!

"...Hayley Spears had more time on warships than most qualified navigators, and she knew the stastistics as well as any of them, but she still didn't like the idea of crossing the sea on a civilian transport cargo ship. Maybe because of the presanse of her (soon to be) wife and son-in-law made her a little itchier than usual. No, that wasn't right. She wasn't itchy at all. Not about sailing, anyway. It was just a lingering... god damn, what is it? she asked herself. Next to her, in the circular window seat, Serophec Tyo was immersed in the Saradomin Bible she started following the day before, while Hayley was trying to concentrate on the current issue of the Kinsha versus the White Knights, and wondering what was putting the cold-air feeling between the two rival factions. She started to look around the cabin for any signs of danger but abruptly stopped herself. There wasn't anything wrong taht she could se, and she didn't want to seem like a nervous sailor to the crew and passangers. She sipped at the glass of her wine, shook her shoulders, and went back to the brand new news article on how "peaceful" the world was.

Right. She grimaced. Well, yes, she had to admit that things were hell of a lot better than they'd been for nearly all of her life. No more swimming out of a warship to do a collection on a Kandarin Beach, or flying into Al-Kharid via gnome glider the Kharidians didn't like very much, or swimming up a fetid river in Karamja to rescue a lost Temple Knight unit. Someday maybe Glenn Grim would talk her into making a book on her career. Problem was, who'd belive it- and would the Temple Knights ever allow her to tell her tales except on her own deathbed? She was not in a rush for that, not with a new family to start. Damn. She grimaced, unwilling to contemplate that development. Serophec must have caught a silver crossbow bolt on their proposal night, and Andy glowed more about it than she did..."

So yeah, basically this is a story I'm writing up for my own self-enjoyment; Documenting Hayley's past history as well as a small plot I'm planning. This is just a sample of the first chapter; Which is much larger and more detailed. What do you guys think?