Talk:Revan Everric/@comment-4516358-20140514092755

Your last chapter basically just outright copies everything I've tried to create independently and make different in role-play, and given what I had told you about the form of witchcraft and forms of magic Kyrian teaches... There's no debate.

"he tore out his own heart, placing it into a wooden chest and buried it... This is a form of necromancy that few and far between are able to use, and, he had only used it so that he could live on, this left him unfeeling"

"...teach him magic, runeless manifestations of it such as conjuration, teleportation, telekinesis, fire magic and some of those smaller things at first. Caeden's favorite was teleporting, and as a young boy he could teleport short distances..."

", learning more and more of things like low level summoning/conjuration, transmutation, alchemy and weather control."

You literally list EVERY form of the 5 schools of Grim Darkcana, as well as the 3 lesser ones. And the heart thing becoming emotionless thing.. And I know isn't coincidence. Highly, HIGHLY irritated by this, and just, disappointed.