Talk:Guildmaster Pegasus/@comment-4782444-20140521225105

just a few problems.

You state that your adventures started at 10. 10! This leads to a lot of problems with your story. Like the fact Johannas has been doing the same job for 45 years....

Not only this but this 10 year old, overpowered a guard, managed to pose as an adult HAM member (I know Zanik was a bit short when posing but she wasn't disguised as a guard only a member), followed them into the desert on his own, easily took down a 'special squad' of HAM, and then beating an even bigger group of H.A.M.

Also somehow, practicing fighting giant rats gave you the combat experiance to beat these HAM members.

Also I could've sworn that the adventurer was the first person to set foot in Dorgeshuun, which Mistag specifically mentions.

Also 'seen your kind on the island of entrana', when? when did you go to entrana?

Enchanted ice doesn't work like that, if you remember from tales of the muspah you needed enchanted sapphires.

The seer wouldn't know mahjarrat were from Freneskae.

If king Narnode Shareen would've sent you a message, it would be from a terrorbird, not an Ibis.

He's defeated '2' mahjarrat!

No matter how powerful this demon was he couldn't have teleported to Infernus

I doubt you could draw anima mundi power from infernus

I doubt you could 'survive' on infernus.

Oh and finally, I don't think Hank has been running that shop for 45+ years.

It'd be a good story if the lore was correct.