Talk:Guildmaster Pegasus/@comment-4782444-20140615232909/@comment-5049048-20140721102623

21 on a Mary-Sue test? I somehow can't quite believe this and would like to offer my own observation. Apologies in advance.

Test: So! You may dispute some of the points I have chosen, but most of these are taken straight from the page.
 * is human (or part human) and over 6' tall (2 points)
 * is stronger than average for their race (2 points)
 * is faster than average for their race (2 points)
 * is described/considered to be excellent in combat (2 points)
 * is some combination of warrior, mage, and/or ranger (2 points)
 * and is very skilled in both/all (2 more points)
 * For every form of non-magic combat your character has learned (2: Swordsmanship, Ranging)
 * For each of these in which he/she is very skilled/a master (2 points)
 * Magic
 * elemental (1 point)
 * bind/entangle/etc. (1 point)
 * enchant/alchemy/misc (1 point)
 * knows all/most of them (5 points)
 * uses custom magic/spells which do not exist in RS lore (5 points)
 * communicates with animals (1 point)
 * summoning (1 point)
 * (performs any magic without the use of runes/shards/pouches/crystal seeds (3 points))
 * is otherwise extremely intelligent compared to others of their age/race (3 points)
 * has enhanced senses beyond racial capabilities (2 points)
 * For every language they speak, besides their first language (6 points)
 * for every language they can read/write, including their first language (1-6 points)
 * knows/knew a canon character (an NPC) (2 points)
 * owns specialized or uncommon weapons or items (3 points) (Crystal bow, Dorgeshuun Crossbow, Saradomin staff (Dragon scimitar? It's on there somewhere still))
 * For each pet or animal familiar your character owns (1 point)
 * and if any of them are unusual (2 points) (Phoenix does count)
 * (No info on personal relations to character)
 * is 100% human and always has been (remove 1 point)
 * is employed in a common trade/job, and trained/apprenticed to learn this trade, and works hard at it regularly in order to provide for him/herself (remove 2 points)
 * is old enough to have lived over half his/her natural lifespan and looks it (remove 2 points)
 * Up to 4 more points removed from allowing opponents to live or similar and scarring.

Score:

2+2+2+2+2+2+2+2+1+1+1+5+5+1+1(+3)+3+2+6+1(to 6)+2+3+1+2 = 51 to 59

-1-2-2(-4) = -5 to -9

Final scores:

Lowest: 42

Highest: 54

Without paranthesis: 46

With paranthesis: 50