Talk:Hadrian Baldor/@comment-25886305-20141231053124/@comment-4516358-20141231160227

Psst, I like the character, Steve. But a couple of bits of constructive criticism. Nothing big!


 * Kingdom of Asgarnia was founded in the late Fourth Age, by King Raddallin. There are numerous unnamed monarchs between him and Valance, as it's well over 100 years difference. :P


 * Rimmington didn't exist at the time of Crandor's fall (given Crandorians had fled and set up camp where Rimmington would later exist, but Elvarg followed and destroyed them all), which happened in Year 139 of the Fifth Age. So the settlement itself is younger than that. Perhaps an unnamed village (of your choice) close by would work for the story purposes.


 * In the RS Novels, the Kinshra, under Sulla, attacked in the year 164, not 163 - as the battle called War of 164. :)