Talk:The Godless/@comment-4536066-20140530180608

Since this page has been put into the running for a featured article and the writing was put under review, I would suggest that someone invested in this article goes through it and corrects all of the grammer/syntax errors. There's nothing here that disqualifies it, but there are still a lot of minor mistakes. Pay special attention to all of the unneeded capitalization of words that are not proper nouns, the inappropriate punctuation in section headings (like periods at the end), and the occasional run-on/convoluted sentence.