Talk:Hest/@comment-5049048-20140327115444

I would recommend that you:


 * 1) Decide on and check all names (There have been several instances of different spelling of the most commonly used names in the article)
 * 2) Add an 'appearance' section detailing how the character looks
 * 3) If possible, obtain pictures to add to the article to make it less of a text wall
 * 4) Re-evaluate the use of several stops in sentences (...), as these seem used too commonly and possibly in wrong places.
 * 5) *Also in accordance to this, possibly allow for more line breaks in places of longer conversation.
 * 6) *^In places, make more clear who is speaking at the given moment.